My continued stories will
resume soon.
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Below is a chapter of a story
that will not be written. One might ask
why? The reason is simple, because it has already been written so many times.
It has been set in different
times from the early 1900s and into the future. The result is always the same
and easily recognizable.
Chapter Eight
At times he, Luis felt like
little more than a flunkey for here again he was on his way to give Father Leon
money for his services.
The son of a widow had
suddenly appeared in the river after being missing for two weeks. Father Leon would say comforting words and
give assurances all was well with the soul of the departed.
He and his under priests and
Nuns ran the church, the school and more importantly for some, “The Soup
kitchen.” Father Leon didn’t like to
take the money but felt he had to weigh the good against the bad and grudgingly
would give in.
Luis the son of the kingpin
of all the vice in the district wasn’t too happy with his lot, but on occasion
would act like his father when dealing with a situation.
He hated the smell of the
soup kitchen but was ordered to check on it once a week to make sure everything
they needed was available.
On this occasion he saw a
girl who was working in the back helping to clean up and he felt he knew her
from somewhere. He couldn’t place her
but she kept appearing in his thoughts.
Even though she was dressed
down he could tell she was shapely and very nice looking. Her skin tone and facial features said she
was Italian. He wasn’t satisfied until
he found out who she was and where she lived.
Luis spent hours trying to
place her and didn’t understand why he should be so taken by her for there were
other girls just as pretty and readily available.
After getting her phone
number he finally got up the nerve to call her.
He made the call after seven in the evening and started off by saying,
“You don’t know me, but my name is Luis…”
At that she cut him off and said,
“I know you.”
He said, “I think I know you
and…” She cut him off again and said, “There is a café down the block from me
and if you want to talk then meet me there in ten minutes.”
He said, “I know the place
and I will be there for I have several questions to ask you.”
Arriving first, he sat in a
booth in the rear of the restaurant.
She came in and went directly
to the back after telling the counter man to bring her a cup of black
coffee. He started to introduce himself
and try to break the ice with some inane prattle but when he looked at her facial
muscles they were taut and not in the mood for wasted chatter.
She spoke and said, “You
indeed know me. We were in the same
grade at St. Josephs. You were two years
older than me but you had been put back twice and were two grades back from
where you should have been.
Due to your fathers influence
in the neighborhood you were the most popular boy in school. All the girls were in love with you with me
among them. You asked me to go to the
movies with you and after a lot of necking and the movie being over you took me
into an alley and had your way with me.
I tried to resist but you were too strong for me and because of all the
kissing I thought you loved me so I gave in.
Afterward I told my mother
and father but they were afraid of your father so it was off to the convent for
me. I just returned a month ago after
finishing school there.”
He started to say something…
but she said, “Tell me you don’t remember that.”
He stumbled at trying to find
some words that would defuse the conversation but was almost speechless for this
wasn’t what he had in mind for the evening.
When some kind of situation would arise that made him uncomfortable he
would usually man up and take control but he was weakened by her accusation.
As his voice returned he was
going to blame her and was thinking of several things to tell her like she
asked for it and deserved what she got and to go on from there until he had
beaten her down.
As he began his tirade she
pulled a small caliber semi automatic from her sweater pocket and pulled the
slide to load a bullet in the chamber.
His words stopped when he saw
the gun.
She said, “This is for
me. She then pulled another identical
weapon from her other pocket and said this one is for you. She stood up and said, “Not now but soon.
She went on and said. “By
tomorrow everyone will know the details of what you did to me and that I have
threatened you. Your father may deal
harshly with you before I do. Your
friends will see you in a different light from now on.”
As she put the loaded guns
back in her pocket she repeated: “This one is for me and this one is for you.”
His apologies were lost on
her as she left the café.
Luis thought to himself, “Now
I remember her and everything about her.
I bragged about what I had done to everyone I knew and they considered
her damaged goods. She was constantly
humiliated by boys hitting on her till she was sent away.
The humiliation must have
been worse than the event. This is hell,
wondering if she was serious. The words
this one is for me and this one is for you won’t allow me to have a minute’s
peace.”
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This post is
shared at: Tell Me a Story and although fictional, it could be true any day in your town.
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